Week 7 Story: Tricking the Monkey King
Sonny, a boy that was known for creating mischiefs, was bored and had nothing to do up in Heaven. He wandered around everywhere, causing trouble and anger to all the gods he encountered. The gods all went to the King of Heaven and begged him to do something about it. Sonny had a light radiating around him that prevented others from harming him or otherwise, the gods would have done something about it. Even the King of Heaven was stuck. He didn't know what to do. A thought suddenly popped into in his mind. His wife has been nagging him to find someone to watch her peach gardens as she gets ready for the annual Peach ball. Thus, he sent Sonny to the peach gardens to help.
When he walked in the golden gates, a couple of fairies flew over.
"Hello, your light drew us to you. What are you doing here? Are you here to take us away? Please don't we haven't been slacking!" they cried in fear.
"Calm down goodness gracious. I am just here to help out on the orders of the King. Now tell me why there are so many peach trees and what am I supposed to do with them?" he rambled on.
"The first 1200 trees have red blossoms and small fruit, and those who eat will grow healthy. They only ripen once every three thousand years. Next, the middle 1200 trees have double blossoms with sweet fruit, and those who consume these fruits will never age. They only ripen every six thousand years. Lastly, the 1200 trees in the very back has red-striped fruit and they will allow a person to live eternally along with the Heavens. They only ripen once every nine thousand years," the fairies explained.
(Peach orchard blooming: Wikimedia Commons)
Sonny thought to himself about how he wanted his family back in the mortal world to be eternal too. His job, according to the fairies, was to make sure no one steals the peaches before the great ball that the Queen throws every year. Thus, he put his plan into place and waited one day until all the fairies went on their beauty break to put on more makeup. He stumbled to the very back of the garden and gobbled up all the peaches, putting some in a bag for his family. After, munching on all of the ripe ones, he escaped out of the golden gates and back into the mortal world.
When the fairies got back to their break, a message was sent to them from the Queen to pick the ripe peaches in the back rows for the gods coming to the ball. They scampered down there, and all that was left was a half ripe peach hanging on the branches alone with peach cores all over the ground.
Author's Note: I basically kept everything from the original story the same. Sonny is supposed to be the Monkey King named Sun Wu Kung. I made it so it was a human named Sonny. Also, I gave more background on the gardeners in the garden. Instead of just "gardeners", I changed the, to fairies! Everything else was the same except the family, where in the case of the original story, was his ape family that he grew up with. I also gave background on how Sun Wu Kung (Sonny) was able to get rid of the gardeners. Every other detail was from the original story.
Bibliography: The Queen-Mother of the West in The Chinese Fairy Book, ed. by R. Wilhelm and translated by Frederick H. Martens (1921)
Author's Note: I basically kept everything from the original story the same. Sonny is supposed to be the Monkey King named Sun Wu Kung. I made it so it was a human named Sonny. Also, I gave more background on the gardeners in the garden. Instead of just "gardeners", I changed the, to fairies! Everything else was the same except the family, where in the case of the original story, was his ape family that he grew up with. I also gave background on how Sun Wu Kung (Sonny) was able to get rid of the gardeners. Every other detail was from the original story.
Bibliography: The Queen-Mother of the West in The Chinese Fairy Book, ed. by R. Wilhelm and translated by Frederick H. Martens (1921)
Hey, Anhthu!
ReplyDeleteNice work with this retelling -- I like the idea of a regular boy being given the responsibility of tending to the peach orchards of the gods. I think I probably would have done the same thing Sonny did if I was in his shoes; grab enough immortality peaches for my family, friends and me and gotten out of there!
Hey Anhthu!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your altered version of the story. I liked the name change, I think it helped with the flow of your version of the story. I also think your fairies addition was a great idea. I think if made the garden more angelic and emphasized the importance of the peaches.
Hi Anhthu!
ReplyDeleteI like that you made the monkey king a regular boy up in the heavens. It created a funny contrast between a regular boy with light glowing around him and all of the gods in the heavens. As soon as the peach trees came into the story, I knew that the boy was going to be up to no good! I also thought that the way you divided your paragraphs was very good. Great story!
Hey Anhthu! I really enjoyed the way you took a classic and beloved piece of mythology and changed the way in which in it was presented and some details, while still being able to pay respect and make it parallel to the original story while still being a great piece of storytelling. Retelling famous mythology is always tough to do, but I think you did it well. The writing was very great and it was really engaging! Great job!
ReplyDeleteAnhthu,
ReplyDeleteI loved this story! It was so charming and your use of dialogue to separate the text was excellent. This is a fantastic rendition; adding the fairies was a great choice (I love all things fantasy), and the whole vision of what you were trying to accomplish I think went very, very well. You did a great job characterizing the Sonny and the setting, your photo was very effective. I felt like I was watching the story unfold. Great job!
-Moriah C.